"According to the passage it is about United States” sugar consumption. It has increased since 1982. But the main problem is it is rising higher than number of US population growth. Because American people eat unhealthy foods a lot. There are 2 different consumption styles. One of them is economic consumption and the other one is people consumption."

Students write the darndest things: fluency level 8, advanced, KP-Tk0811 excerpt from integrated writing response.